经典初中英语作文题目大全(50篇)

初中英语作文题目及范文解读

1．假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受请并询问至少三个相关细节（如课程安排......）。 注意： 1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Li ping，

I am happy to welcome you here as an exchange student.If you can come，you will study in our school from June 5th to July 4th.Is it OK with you？And you can ask me any question about the school.Please reply in writing to this letter by May 26th .

David Smith

Principle of Jefferson Middle School

Dear Mr.Smith， .

Yours， Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

Before I go,I want to know about the course arrangement so that I can prepare in advance.在我走之前，我想知道课程安排，以便我能提前准备。so that 为了 【高分句型二】

Looking forward to hearing from you.期待您的来信。look forward to期待 【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，

I am very pleased to receive your letter.I'm glad to be an exchange student in your school.I will be there on June 1st.（接受邀请） Before I go,I want to know about the course arrangement so that I can prepare in advance. （询问课程）【高分句型一】At the same time,what's the weather like and what clothes do I need to prepare?（询问天气） What rules do schools have to obey?Please tell me more. （询问要注意的）

Looking forward to hearing from you.【高分句型二】

Yours， Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

2．请你根据所给写作要点和提示，以Advice for Good Manners为题写一篇短文，谈如何遵守社会公德，做一个文明有礼的人．要求文中不得出现真实的人名，和地名，词数不少于80个词．

Advice for Good Manners 写作要点

提示词

Beginning Body Part

what to talk about how to behave at home how to behave in public

behave well

be good to ， help with make noise， litter hope， follow， try to be

Ending

_________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】

why to talk about it

It's important for everyone to behave well．

对每个人来说，举止得体是很重要的．It's+形容词 to do sth做某事是…的． 【高分句型二】

We should also pay attention to the table manners． 我们也应该注意餐桌礼仪．pay attention to 注意… 【解答】Advice for Good Manners

It's important for everyone to behave well．【高分句型一】（点题）

We should be good to our family． It is our duty to help with housework． We should also pay attention to the table manners．【高分句型二】 When we eat with the old， we should let them eat first．．We should also behave well in public． We shouldn't make noise in the library． Give our seats to people in need when we are on the buses．It is necessary to speak politely to the old． We should never litter everywhere．（具体如何表现）

I hope we can follow the rules and try to be a person with good manners．（呼吁大家做个有礼貌的人）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

3．假设你叫李华，是英国中学生彼得的笔友，你收到了他的来信．请给彼得写一封回信，回答他的有关压岁钱（lucky money）的问题，提出你的建议．

Hi!Li Hua，

I am living in Chengdu now．I was very lucky that I spent the Spring Festival with my host family．It was surprising and interesting that I received lucky money in the red paper from my host parents．Did you get lucky money this year？How do you

usually spend it？And what can I do with the money？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．

Yours， Peter

Hi!Peter，

I'm glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu． The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．Giving lucky money to children is a custom．I get lucky money every year．I will put most of it inthe bank，and spend the rest on some books．This year，I also got lucky money．With it，I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia． For you，I think it's a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family before you leave China．You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England．Or，just keep it as good memories．

I hope what I said can help you．

Yours， Li Hua

【分析】高分句型一：

For you，I think①②it's a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family③before you leave China．对于你，我认为你离开中国之前用压岁钱为你的寄宿家庭买一件礼物，这是一个好主意．

①think后跟省略了that引导词的宾语从句

②It+be+（for sb）to do sth（对某人来说）做某事是…的，it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语．

③before引导的时间状语从句 高分句型二：

I hope①what I said can help you．我希望我说的可以帮助你． ①what引导的宾语从句，作hope的宾语 【解答】One possible version： Hi!Peter，

I'm glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu．

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．Giving lucky money to children is a custom．I get lucky money every year．I will put most of it in the bank，and spend the rest on some books．This year，I also got lucky money．With it，I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia．【今年获得了压岁钱及如何花】

For you，I think it's a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family before you leave China．【高分句型一】You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England．Or，just keep it as good memories．【给出建议】 I hope what I said can help you．【高分句型二】 Yours， Li Hua

【点评】考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．

4．从下面两个题目中任选一题， 根据中文和英文提示， 完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 题目①

你校英语社团正在招募志愿者为国际学生线上讲述中国非物质文化遗产（ intangible cultural heritage）故事，传播中国文化。假如你是李华，请你用英文给该社团老师写一封自荐信，内容包括：你的基本信息，申请成为志愿者的理由及作为志愿者你能为讲述中国故事做些什么。

提示词语：be good at， spread， video， history， kite 提示问题： ●What's your basic information？ ●Why would you like to be a volunteer？ ●What can you do as a volunteer？ Dear Mr. Smith，

I am interested in volunteering to tell stories about China's intangible cultural heritage to international students online.

.

Thank you for your consideration. And I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely ， Li Hua 题目②

掌握了正确的方法，做事往往能收到事半功倍的效果。反之，则会事倍功半。

某英文网站正在开展以\"改进学习方法\"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你通过改进学习方法提高学习效果的一次经历，主要内容包括：你学习中遇到了什么问题，你是如何通过改进方法解决这个问题的，效果如何。 提示词语： remember words， change， write， use， increase 提示问题： ●What problem did you have in your study？ ● How did you improve your ways of learning to solve the problem？ ●What was the effect？

Proper ways of learning bring good results. . 【分析】【高分句型一】

I love Chinese culture very much and I'm good at English.我非常喜欢中国文化，我擅长英语。 be good at擅长…… 【高分句型二】

If I have the chance， I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites.如果我有机会，我可以制作视频告诉国际学生风筝的历史，教他们制作风筝。

if引导条件状语从句。 【解答】Dear Mr. Smith，

I am interested in volunteering to tell stories about China's intangible cultural heritage to international students online.（点题）

I am Li Hua， a boy from Class 2， Grade 9. I love Chinese culture very much and I'm good at English.【高分句型一】 I hope I can spread Chinese culture by telling stories about our intangible cultural heritage. If I have the chance， I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. 【高分句型二】I'm sure they will be very

interested in it.（介绍自己）

Thank you for your consideration. And I am looking forward to your reply.（期待） Sincerely ， Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

5．假如你是李华，你们学校将要组织师生观看话剧《茶馆》，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他演出的时间和地点，以及建议他做哪些准备。

提示词语：information，theatre，read，brief introduction （简介） 提示问题：When and where will you see the play？ What do you advise Peter to prepare for it？ Dear Peter， How is it going？

Teachers and students in our school will go to see a famous play Teahouse. . If there is anything that I can do，please let me know.

Yours， Li Hua 【分析】【高分句型一】

Would you like to come with us？你愿意和我们一起去吗？ would like to do sth想做某事。 【高分句型二】

If you like，you can read about its writer Lao She and get the brief introduction of the play first.如果你愿意，你可以读一下作者老舍的介绍，先了解一下剧本的简介。 if引导条件状语从句。 【解答】Dear Peter， How is it going？

Teachers and students in our school will go to see a famous play Teahouse.Would you like to come with us？【高分句型一】Here's the information for it.We will see it at Beijing Poly Theatre at 2 p.m.next Friday.（时间和地点）

Teahouse describes the changes in Chinese society over fifty years.If you like，you can read about its writer Lao She and get the brief introduction of the play first.【高分句型二】It will help you understand the play much better.（建议）

If there is anything that I can do，please let me know.（总结全文）

Yours， Li Hua 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

6．请你就\"什么是世界上最伟大的发明\"这个主题，发表一下看法，内容包括：1）按照你的观点，什么是世界上最伟大的发明？2）你为什么这么认为？3）你平时经常用 这个发明来做什么？（要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 60 词） 提示词语：opinion，invention， because， help，

提示问题： 1）In your opinion， what is the greatest invention in the world？ 2）Why do you think so？

3）What do you often do with the invention？ ______．

【分析】【高分句型一】

What's more， they can help solve problems and make students learn more．更重要的是，他们可以帮助解决问题，使学生学习更多．help do sth表示帮着做某事．

【高分句型二】

It is important for us to use computers properly．正确使用电脑对我们很重要．

it is important for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事很重要．

【解答】In your opinion， the computer is the greatest invention in the world．（最重要的发明是什么）They have changed the world and played an important role in our daily life． People can shop online if they don't want to go out．What's more， they can help solve problems and make students learn more． 【高分句型一】Students can watch English videos and learn spoken English．（原因）

It is important for us to use computers properly． 【高分句型二】I often use it to look up information． We should use it to study rather than play games．（我经常用它做什么）

That's all! Thank you!

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

7．假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike想了解中国人过春节的习俗，请你给他写一封邮件，简单介绍一下你和家人在过春节前都做什么准备，在春节期间通常吃什么及做什么。 提示词语：clean，buy，dumpling，watch，visit 提示问题：● How do you get ready for Spring Festival？ ● What do you usually eat and do during the festival？ Dear Mike，

I'm very glad to tell you about how people celebrate Spring Festival in China. .

I hope you can come to China and celebrate Spring Festival with us some year. Yours，

Li Hua 【分析】【高分句型一】

We eat lots of traditional food，such as dumplings.我们吃很多传统食物，比如饺子。 such as例如…… 【高分句型二】

Children are the happiest，because they can get red envelopes from their parents.孩子们是最幸福的，因为他们可以从父母那里拿到红包。 because引导原因状语从句。 【解答】Dear Mike，

I'm very glad to tell you about how people celebrate Spring Festival in China.Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people.We usually clean up our houses and buy a lot of food to get ready for it.（春节前的准备）

On the evening before the Chinese New Year comes，we have a big family dinner.We eat lots of traditional food，such as dumplings.【高分句型一】After the dinner，we watch a special programme on TV.Children are the happiest，because they can get red envelopes from their parents. 【高分句型二】During the festival，we also visit each other and have fun together.（春节期间的活动）

I hope you can come to China and celebrate Spring Festival with us some year.（希望） Yours ， Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

8．英语周报将举办以\"My happy family\"为题的演讲比赛，请你根据表格信息及英文提示写一篇符合逻辑的演讲稿．短文不少于40个词

人物 职业身份 年龄 爱好

loves bikes

father teacher 38

mother cook 37

I student 14 like

basketball

riding likes

reading

Hello，everyone．My name is Tim．I have a happy family．There are 3 people in it．They are my father，my mother and I． ． 【分析】高分句型一

He likes riding a bike．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth \"喜欢做某事\"，短语ride a bike \"骑自行车\"，此句可翻译为\"他喜欢骑自行车．\" 高分句型二

I love my family．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语love sth \"爱某事\"，此句可翻译为\"我爱我家．\"

【解答】My happy family

My name is Tim．I have a happy family．（要点一，介绍自己的姓名及有一个幸福的家庭．）There are 3 people in it．They are my father，my mother and I． My father is a teacher． He is 38 years old．He likes riding a bike．（高分句型一） My mother is a cook． She is 37 years old．She likes reading．I am a middle school student． I'm 14 years old． I like playing basketball．（要点二，介绍自己的所有家庭成员的职业、年龄及爱好．）This is my family．I love my family．（高分句型二）（要点三，我的观点．） 【点评】本题是图表作文，能够根据图表提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

9．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony春节期间要来一个中国家庭做客．请你根据他来信所提出的问题，给他写一封邮件，告诉他北京的天气状况，中国春节的一些习俗，并就他在中国家庭的居住生活提出至少两条建议．

提示词语：cold，snow，the most important，try not to，don't，it's a good idea，must．

To：Tony From：Li Hua

Subject：Visiting a Chinese family Hi!Tony，

I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing． Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day． When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later． I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing． Yours，

Li Hua．

【分析】高分句型一

There are some special traditions for you to follow．下面是你要遵循的一些特殊的传统． 这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物． 高分句型二

When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．当你拜访一个中国家庭时，带一件小礼物是个好主意，通常中国人会送你一份礼物．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候． 【解答】To：Tony From：Li Hua

Subject：Visiting a Chinese family Hi!Tony，

I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing．Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．【要点一，介绍北京的天气】

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day．【要点二，介绍春节的传统】

When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later．【要点三，建议】 I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing． Yours， Li Hua

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．

10．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．

假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办一场阅读沙龙（Reading Salon），你打算邀请你们班交换生Tim参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点和内容，以及需要做什么 准备．

提示词语：introduce， talk about，learn

提示问题：When and where will you hold the Reading Salon？ What will you do at the Salon？ What do you advise Tim to prepare for it？

Dear Tim，

How is everything going？ There'll be a Reading Salon in our school．

Looking forward to your early reply．

Li Hua

【分析】高分句型一：

Since you are the book lover，could you please introduce how to develop the habit of reading？ since因为；could you please do…？ 提出要求．这句话意为：因为你是读书爱好者，您能否介绍下如何培养阅读的习惯？ 高分句型二：

I hope we can learn a lot from you about reading．

learn sth from sb向某人学习．这句话意为：我希望我们能向您学习阅读． 【解答】Dear Tim，

How is everything going？ There'll be a Reading Salon in our school．Let me tell you something about it．（开篇点明主题）

First，The Reading Salon will be held on next Thursday in the reading room．It will start at 9：00 a．m．Since you are the book lover，could you please introduce how to develop the habit of reading？（高分句型一）and you also can talk about the reading skills you use and introduce the books you like．You can prepare some books you like from the library so that you can give them brief introduction about the books．I hope we can learn a lot from you about reading（高分句型二）．（具体介绍时间，地点，内容等） Looking forward to your early reply． Li Hua

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

11．题目②

某中学生英文报正在开展以\"做时间的主人\"为主题的征文活动．假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你是如何合理安排时间的，以及合理安排时间给你带来的益处．

提示词语： goal， tasks， plan， organize， cheek， spend， habit， improve， success 提示问题：

•What did you do to manage time well？ •What benefits have you got from doing so？

Time management plays an important role in our life． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】

It's necessary for everyone to learn how to manage time well．

每个人都有必要学会如何管理好时间．It's +形容词 for sb to do sth某人做某事是…的． 【高分句型二】

I always spent time doing important tasks first and took advantage of my downtime．

我总是先把时间花在重要的事情上，然后利用我的休息时间．spend…doing sth花费…做某事．

【解答】Time management plays an important role in our life． It's necessary for everyone to learn how to manage time well．【高分句型一】（点题）

I've tried different ways to manage my time well since entering middle school． Before I began a day， I would think about my goals and make a list of things I needed to do． Then， I organized my to﹣do list to make an effective plan for the day． I always spent time doing important tasks first and took advantage of my downtime．【高分句型二】（我是如何管理时间的）

By managing my time well， I've benefited a lot I've always managed to finish my homework on time and still have time to review and relax． Time management allows me to get the most out of each day and has helped me become successful in various areas of my life．（好处） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

12．假如你叫麦克，你的表哥李华\"五一劳动节\"期间来苏州游玩，你带他四处逛逛，你正写信告诉你的好友（Millie）这两天的活动内容．

时间 5月2日上午 5月2日下午 5月2日晚上 5月3日

活动地点 苏州博物馆 穹隆山 山塘街 书店

活动内容 了解苏州历史 看见青山绿树 闲逛古街老店 购买书籍

感受 自拟（至少一点）

要求：1．意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，注意格式． 2．词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 3．不要出现真实的人名和校名．

注：穹隆山the Qionglong Hill；山塘街Shantang Street Dear Millie．

Thank you for your letter．How is everything going？I am writing to tell you something about my May Day holiday

On the morning of May 2nd，we will go to the Suzhou museum to learn about the history of Suzhou，On the afternoon of May 2nd，we will go to the Qionglong Hill and see green hills and green trees．There are some old streets and shops on Shantang Street，we will go there in the evening．On May 3rd，we will go to the bookstore to buy books because I love reading．I think we will have a good trip．

Love，

Mike．

【分析】高分句型一

There are some old streets and shops on Shantang Street山塘街有一些古老的街道和商店．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物． 高分句型二

I think we will have a good holiday我想我们会度过一个愉快的假期．这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Millie．

Thank you for your letter．How is everything going？I am writing to tell you something about my May Day holiday．

On the morning of May 2nd，we will go to the Suzhou museum to learn about the history of Suzhou，On the afternoon of May 2nd，we will go to the Qionglong Hill and see green hills and green trees．There are some old streets and shops on Shantang Street【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】，we will go there in the evening．On May 3rd，we will go to the bookstore to buy books because I love reading【要点一，详细介绍日程活动】．I think we will have a good holiday．【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【要点二，自己的感受】 Love， Mike．

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．

13．假如你叫Mary，计划在暑假期间参加一个英语夏令营．下面的广告比较符合你的需求，请写一封信提出申请并咨询相关情况．

注意：1．信中应该包括你选择的课程及原因、上课时间，以及其他想要询问的信息，可适当发挥；

2．词数80词左右．开头已经给出（不计入总词数），你只需要接着写．

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am Mary．I'm planning to attend a Summer English Camp during the vacation． As for my choice between the two courses，I prefer to choose Course One which will take 10 days from July 1st to July 10th．First，I believe my English will be greatly

improved through this course．Second，my friends also have interests in it．It would be better if we can study with the help of each other．Finally，I want to learn

some knowledge about painting，especially Chinese painting because I am going to join the painting club next term．

By the way，would you mind telling me some more information about the service and activities mentioned in the advertisement？ I'm really looking forward to your reply．

Sincerely，

Mary

【分析】高分句型一

I believe my English will be greatly improved through this course．此句是复合句，believe后跟宾语从句．运用短语be greatly improved \"被大大地提高\" 此句运用一般将来时的被动语态．此句可译为 \"我相信我的英语会通过这门课程的学习将被大大地提高\"． 高分句型二

It would be better if we can study with the help of each other．此句是复合句，以if引起的条件状语从句．运用短语with the help of \"在…的帮助下\"，each other\"互相，彼此\"，此句可译为\"如果我们能在互相帮助下学习，那就更好了．\" 【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，

I am Mary．I'm planning to attend a Summer English Camp during the vacation．（ 要点一，简单自我介绍．）

As for my choice between the two courses，I prefer to choose Course One which will take 10 days from July 1st to July 10th．First，I believe my English will be greatly improved through this course．（高分句型一） Second，my friends also have interests in it．It would be better if we can study with the help of each other．（高分句型二） Finally，I want to learn some knowledge about painting，especially Chinese painting because I am going to join the painting club next term． （要点二，选择课程的原因．）

By the way，would you mind telling me some more information about the service and activities mentioned in the advertisement？（ 要点三，请求帮助．） I'm really looking forward to your reply．

Sincerely，

Mary

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．注意一些复合句的运用及短语的运用．

14．苏州国际旅游节即将在五月举办．假如你是李明，想要邀请南京的朋友王雷来你家做客．根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信．

地理位置 社区

市中心公寓，住9楼，离观前街只有2公里

绿树环绕，干净整洁

邻居友好，乐于助人（至少举一例）

路线

乘火车从苏州火车站出来：左转进入人民路，往前； 第三个路口右转，你就会看到一个超市；我家就在超市的对面．

注意：（1）词数90左右．邀请信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数． （2）邀请信须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺． （3）邀请信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear Wanglei，

I'm very happy to invite you to my new home．

Welcome to my home．I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．

Yours，Liming

【分析】【高分句型一】

We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this．我们很幸运，生活在这样的社区． be lucky to do sth幸运的做某事． 【高分句型二】

I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．我期待着尽快见到你． look forward to doing sth期待做某事． 【解答】Dear Wanglei，

I am very happy to invite you to my new home．I live in a flat on the ninth floor in the city center．It is only five kilometers away from the Guanqian Street．（地理位置）

There are many green trees around my neighborhood．It's clean and tidy here．The air is fresh，too．The neighbours are kind and helpful．The college volunteers often share their skills and help us with different problems．We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this．（社区）【高分句型一】

Let me tell you the way to my home．You can take the train．Get out from Suzhou Railway Station．Turn left into Renmin Road and go straight on．Turn right at the third turning，and you'll see a supermarket．My home is just opposite it． （路线）

Welcome to my home．I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．（期待）【高分句型二】 Yours， Liming

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

15．假如你是Lin Li，你的美国笔友Rose想认识你的好朋友Han Mei．请根据下表中的信息，用英语写一封邮件给Rose介绍Han Mei．

Name Favorite

Han Mei Food Color Sport Subjects School activities

Telephone number

要求：

1．邮件需包含表中所有信息，并可作适当想象和发挥； 2．语句通畅，书写规范，注意大小写字母和标点； 3．文中不得出现自己真实的姓名、班级和校名； 4．词数60左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数． Dear Rose，

265﹣4328

E﹣mail

Age

14

Birthday

ice﹣cream blue basketball P．E．&．English

June 20th

hanmei@sina．com

Nice to meet you!Now let me tell you something about Han Mei． ______________．

Best wishes，

Lin Li

【分析】高分句型一

For subjects ，she likes P．E．and English because she thinks they are interesting and useful．此句是以because 引起的原因状语从句．句子they are interesting and useful．是动词thinks的宾语．运用短语for subject\"对于学科来说\"，like sth \"喜欢某事\"，此句可翻译为\"对于学科来说，她喜欢体育和英语，因为她认为它们有趣和有用．\" 高分句型二

If you want to make friends with her，you can call her at 26328 or email her at hanmei@sina．com．此句是以if 引起的条件状语从句．主语用含有情态动词的句子，从句用一般现在时代替将来时．运用短语want to do sth \"想做某事\"，短语make friends with sb \"和某人交朋友\"，短语call sb at …\"以…给某人打电话\"，此句可翻译为\"如果你想和她交朋友，你可以给她打电话26328或发邮件到hanmei@sina．com．\" 【解答】Dear Rose，

Nice to meet you!Now let me tell you something about Han Mei．She is my best friend．She is 14 years old．Her birthday is on June 20th．（要点一，介绍好朋友的姓名、年龄、生日）Her favorite food is ice cream，because it tastes good．She likes blue best and most of her things are blue．For sports，she likes playing basketball and she thinks it is fun．For subjects，she likes P．E．and English because she thinks they are interesting and useful．（高分句型一）（要点二，介绍好朋友的爱好及原因．） But she is really busy this month．They have a school trip on October 2nd．School Day is on October 10th．On the 15th and the 16th，they have two ball games，soccer and volleyball．On the 28th，they have a book sale in the school library．If you want to make friends with her，you can call her at 26328 or email her at hanmei@sina．com．（高分句型二）（要点三，介绍好朋友这月很忙碌，参加学校的几个活动及与她联系的方式．） Best wishes， Lin Li

【点评】本题是图表作文，能够根据图表提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

16．假设你叫李华，是学校社团的负责人．请根据以下内容和要求给学校的英文校报写一篇短文，向同学们介绍学校的社团活动． 注意：

1．词数60﹣80灰右（开头和结已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息．否则不予评分． 参考仰汇：solar power （太阳能）

Super Sports Club

Smart Boats Club

Cool Books Club

观看球赛 打乒乓球、篮球 强身健体

Welcome to Our Clubs!

建造小船 用太阳能驱动小船

了解科学

每天阅读一小时 写读书笔记

…（请补充你的一点想法）

There are many clubs in our school． Let me tell you about them． There is something for everyone in our school clubs． Why not join us! 【分析】高分句型一

Let me tell you about them．此句是祈使句的肯定句．句子结构：V（动词原形）+其他．运用短语let sb do sth \"让某人做某事\"，短语tell sb about sth \"关于某事告诉某人\"，此句可翻译为\"关于它们让我来告诉你．\" 高分句型二

We can play table tennis and basketball．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语play+球类\"打…球\"，此句可翻译为\"我们能打乒乓球和篮球．\" 高分句型三

Drive the boat with solar power．此句是祈使句．drive…with…\"用…驱动\"，此句可翻译为\"用太阳能驱动小船．\" 高分句型四

This can improve our reading ability and writing level．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语reading ability and writing level\"阅读能力和写作水平\"，此句可翻译为\"这能提高我们的阅读能力和写作水平．\" 【解答】Welcome to Our Clubs!

There are many clubs in our school． Let me tell you about them．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍学校的俱乐部．）At the Super Sports Club．We can watch the ball game．We can play table tennis and basketball．（高分句型二）We can keep fit．（要点二，在超级体育俱乐部，能做的事情．）At the Smart Boats Club we can make boats． Drive the boat with solar power．（高分句型三）Through these we can get a better understanding of science． （要点三，在智能船俱乐部我们能做的事情．）At Cool Books Club．We can read for an hour every day and take notes． This can improve our reading ability and writing level．（高分句型四） Why not join us？（要点五，邀请加入）

【点评】本题是图表作文，在解答写作这类试题时，要根据所提供的内容，考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲，从而完成写作任务．

17．假如你是李华，请根据以下表格的内容，给你的美国笔友Anna写一封信，介绍你们学校英语角活动的情况．

English Corner Activities

时间 地点

每周五下午 学校礼堂（ school hall）

人员 活动 收获

注意：

1．词数在60左右，可以适当拓展； 2．文中不能透露你自己的个人信息； 3．开头已给出，不计入词数． Dear Anna，

I am happy to tell you our English Corner． 【分析】【高分句型一】

部分学生和老师

用英语交谈；唱英文歌；用英文讲故事；…… 对英语更感兴趣；了解外国文化（ foreign

cultures）；交更多的朋友

I am happy to tell you our English Corner．我很高兴告诉你我们的英语角． be happy to do sth开心做某事． 【高分句型二】

It makes us be interested in English and learn more about foreign cultures．这让我们对英语感兴趣，更多的了解外国文化．

make sb do sth使某人做某事；be interested in 对…感兴趣． 【解答】Dear Anna，

I am happy to tell you our English Corner．【高分句型一】（点题）Our school has an English corner every Friday afternoon． （时间） It is held at the school auditorium． （地点）Some students and teachers take part in the activity．（人员） We talk in English， sing English songs and tell stories in English．（活动） It makes us be interested in English and learn more about foreign cultures．【高分句型二】 We also make more friends．（收获） Yours， Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

18．假如你是李强，开学两个多月了，你认识一个好朋友张峰．请根据下列信息向同学介绍一下他的情况．字数为60个字左右，文中不得出现真实姓名和班级名称．所给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数．并将答案写在答题卡对应的横线上． 1、第二中学七年级（3）班学生； 2、家庭成员：祖父母，父母，姐姐和自己； 3、喜欢打篮球和玩电脑； 4、喜爱的食物：鸡肉和牛奶．

Dear classmates，my name is Li Qiang．I have a good friend in this school．

His mane is Zhang Feng．He is from Class Three and Grade Seven of No.2 Middle School．There are six people in his family．They are his grandparents，his parents，his sister and him．He likes playing basketball after school and he likes playing computer games on weekends．He has a healthy eating habit．His favorite food is chicken and milk．Do you like my good friend？

That's all．Thank you for listening． 【分析】高分句型： 句型一：

He likes playing basketball after school and he likes playing computer games on weekends．他喜欢放学后打篮球，喜欢在周末玩电脑游戏． like doing sth 喜欢做某事 play basketball打篮球 play computer games玩电脑游戏 on weekends在周末 句型二：

In study，if I don't understand，he will help me．在学习中，如果我不明白，他会帮助我的． if引导的条件状语从句

【解答】答案：Dear classmates，my name is Li Qiang．I have a good friend in this school．His mane is Zhang Feng．He is from Class Three and Grade Seven of No.2 Middle School．（第二中学七年级（3）班学生）There are six people in his family．They are his grandparents，his parents，his sister and him．（家庭成员）He likes playing basketball after school and he likes playing computer games on weekends．【高分句型一】（喜欢打篮球和玩电脑）In study，if I don't understand，he will help me．【高分句型二】He has a healthy eating habit．His favorite food is chicken and milk．（喜爱的食物：鸡肉和牛奶．）Do you like my good friend？

That's all．Thank you for listening．

【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．

19．请根据下面要求的信息点，写一篇作文．要求句子通顺，书写工整，格式规范，字数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名及班级． 1．介绍自己及家庭成员； 2．介绍你及家人喜欢的运动； 3．介绍你房间的一样物品及其位置．

Hello，everyone!_______________________________________________________ 【分析】【高分句型一】

There are four people in my family我的家有四个人． there be有 【高分句型二】

My father and mother like playing table tennis我的爸爸妈妈喜欢打乒乓球． like doing sth喜欢做某事

【解答】Hello，everyone!My name is Eric Brown．Nice to meet you!I'm a student in a middle school．There are four people in my family．【高分句型一】They are my parents，little sister and me．I like sports very much．I always play tennis with my family．My father and mother like playing table tennis【高分句型二】．And my sister likes swimming．（介绍你及家人喜欢的运动；）I have a lovely room．The bed is near the bookcase．And there is a desk and a chair．The computer is on the desk．My room is tidy．（房间的一样物品及其位置）Do you want to be my friend？

【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章要表达的主题，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．

20．请根据以下提示介绍你家人的日常生活，要求 80 词以上。

爸爸：工程师，在实验室（lab） 工作。为了（in order to） 不污染空气，爸爸从不开车上班。每天走六公里路。

妈妈：地理老师。早上6：30起床，8：00到学校，每周有12节课。晚上经常需要备课，很少看电视。

哥哥：16岁，爱好：听音乐和做运动；放学后有时候参加学校的社团（club） 活动；晚饭后经常帮助我学习。

周末的家庭活动：（请你补充）

My Family

There are four people in my family.__________________________ 【分析】【高分句型一】

In order not to pollute the air， my father walks six kilometers to work every day instead of driving a car. 为了不污染空气，我父亲每天步行六公里去上班而不开车。 in order to do sth为了做某事。 instead of而不是…… 【高分句型二】

He often helps me with my studies after supper.晚饭后他经常帮助我学习。 help with帮助某人做某事。 【解答】

My Family

There are four people in my family. They are my parents， my brother and I.（点题）My father is an engineer. He works in a lab.In order not to pollute the air， my father walks six kilometers to work every day instead of driving a car. 【高分句型一】My mother is a geography teacher.She gets up at 6：30 in the morning and goes to school at 8：00.She has twelve classes a week.She often needs to prepare for her lessons in the evening， so she seldom watches TV.My brother is sixteen years old.He likes listening to music and doing sports.He sometimes takes part in club activities after school.He often helps me with my studies after supper.【高分句型二】（介绍家人）At weekends， we often go for a picnic.（周末活动） I love my family.（感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

21．假设你是John，最近你向朋友Tom分享了自己寒假的学习和生活．请根据提示，写一篇90词左右的邮件．

1． 寒假每天7点半起床，10点半睡觉． 2． 参加数学和英语补习班（take……classes ） 3． 按计划完成各科作业 4． 帮忙做家务如搞卫生，购物． 5． 自己观点2点．

要求： 1． 文章必须包含全部要点内容，可作合理拓展； 2． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．

Hi， Tom． What's going on？ I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．

Yours， John

【分析】【高分句型一】

I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．我想告诉你一些关于我的假期生活． would like to do sth想做某事． 【高分句型二】

I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months．这学期我必须努力学习，因为三个月后我就要期末考试了． because引导原因状语从句．

【解答】Hi ，Tom． What's going on？I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．【高分句型一】（点题）

During the Winter Holiday， I did a lot of things． First， I got up at half past seven in the morning even though it was cold， and I went to bed at half past ten at night every day． Second， I took part in Maths and English lessons to learn more． Third， I finished all my homework according to my plan． Forth， I helped do some housework． For example， I often cleaned the floor or did some shopping for my family． Fifth， I did exercise often．Going to the park to have a walk or jogging was my favourite． Sixth， visiting my relatives during the Spring Festival was my lucky time because I could get lucky money! I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months． 【高分句型二】（介绍寒假学习和生活）

Yours， John 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

22．上个月，你参加了学校举行的英语周活动。请根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，在班会上介绍英语周的活动情况并分享你的收获与感受。 参与人员 活动项目 你参加的项目 你的感受与收获 注意：

1. 词数：80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点适当发挥）。 2. 可根据内容适当发挥。

3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分 Hello， everyone! We had an English Week in our school last month. . 【分析】【高分句型一】

We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.我们对英语越来越感兴趣，口语能力也有了很大的提高。 became interested in对……感兴趣。 【高分句型二】

I think it is a good way to learn English. think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句。 a good way to do sth做某事的好方法。

【解答】Hello， everyone! We had an English Week in our school last month.（点题） All the students and our English teachers took part in it.（参加人员）During the week，we sang English songs，joined in English speaking contests，and watched English films.We told stories in English.（活动内容）

We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.【高分句型一】As everyone knows，practice makes perfect.I learned a lot from the activity.I think it is a good way to learn English．【高分句型二】I like it very much.（收获和感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

所有的学生和英语老师 英文演讲比赛，看英文电影… 英文演讲比赛并拿到一等奖 …

23．新闻每天发生，视角各有不同．请以你的视角为下面这幅校园新闻图片写一个标

题．

A basketball game ．

【分析】根据图片可知，同学们在进行篮球比赛，故标题可以为\"一场篮球比赛\"． 【解答】A basketball game

【点评】做这道题时要仔细观察图片，确定图片的主题，然后写出正确的标题．

24．有时候，简简单单的一句话、能产生巨大的能量，让人刻骨铭心，助人勇敢前行。仔细想一想，生活中对你触动最深、影响最大的一句话是什么呢？请根据所给提示和要求，以\"A Simple Word\"为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，讲述这一句话及其背后的故事。以下提示仅供参考。 提示：

1.You can do it. 2.Believe in yourself.

3.Keep trying and you'll succeed. 要求：

1.说出这句话的来历及对你的影响； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

A Simple Word

. 【分析】【高分句型一】

I was learning how to ride a bicycle when I was 6 years old.我六岁的时候正在学骑自行车。when引导的时间状语从句 【高分句型二】

I felt upset and didn't want to ride any more.我感到心烦意乱，不想再骑自行车了。any more不再 【解答】

A Simple Word

Sometimes，a simple word can change a person.Until today，I still remember what my mother once told me， \"keep trying，and you will succeed. \"The word helped me a lot.

I was learning how to ride a bicycle when I was 6 years old.【高分句型一】I tried many times，but I still fell down.I felt upset and didn't want to ride any more【高分句型二】.Knowing what happened，my mother said to me：\"Keep trying，and you will succeed.Believe in yourself and

you can do it.\" .My mother's word made me calm down.I tried to ride my bicycle again and again.Finally，I succeeded.

Whenever I meet difficulties，my mother's word appears in my mind.I'll keep trying and never give up.

【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。

25．春节是中国重要的传统节日，某英文报纸正以\" Our Traditional Festival﹣the Spring Festival\"为题征文．请你投稿，介绍中国人如何庆祝春节，以及你最喜欢的庆祝活动．（不少于40 词，所给图片和提示词语仅供选用） What do people do to celebrate the Spring Festival in China？

Our Traditional Festival﹣the Spring Festival 【分析】高分句型一

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语the most important festival \"最重要的节日\"，短语in China \"在中国\"，此句可翻译为\"春节在中国是最重要的节日．\" 高分句型二

In many places people like to set off firecrackers．

放鞭炮．此句是一般现在时的一般陈述句．运用短语like to do sth \"喜欢做某事\"，短语set off\"点燃、放\"，此句可翻译为\"在许多地方人们喜欢放鞭炮．\" 高分句型三

This money is given to children for good luck．

此句是一般现在时的被动语态的陈述句．运用短语good luck\"好运\"，此句可翻译为\"这钱是给孩子们的，以祝他们好运\" 高分句型四

People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语put …up …\"把…挂在…上\"，此句可翻译为\"人们把新年卷轴挂在墙上，祈求好运．\"

高分句型五

The Spring Festival would be finished at the Lantern Festival in two weeks．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语at Lantern Festival \"在元宵节\"，运用短语in two weeks\"两周之后\"，此句可翻译为\"春节将在2个星期以后的元宵节后结束．\" 高分句型六

It could take people good luck all the year round．

此句是一般现在时的陈述句，运用could +do（原形）是表示句子的语气更委婉．运用短语all the year round \"一整年\"，此句可翻译为\"它可以给人们一整年带来好运．\" 【解答】Our Traditional Festival﹣the Spring Festival

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．【高分句型一】（要点一，春节是中国最重要的节日．）It's to celebrate the lunar calendar ‘s new year．它是为了庆祝农历新年．Because of celebrating

the Spring Festival，People do a lot of things ，They clean the house，hang the red lanterns and make

dumplings．They buy a lot of food．（要点二，为庆祝节日，人们做的很多事情．）In the evening before the Spring Festival ，families get together and have a big meal．In many places people like to set off firecrackers．【高分句型二】Dumplings are the most traditional food．（要点三，春节期间人们在一起吃年夜饭、放鞭炮．）Children like the festival very much ，because they can have delicious food and wear new

clothes．They can also get some money from their parents．This money is given to children for good luck．【高分句型三】（要点四，孩子春节期间喜欢做的事情．）People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune．【高分句型四】Everybody watches TV and chats．They watch a dragon dance．In the midnight，family members usually decorate the doors and windows by pasting up red papercuts，because red means good luck．（要点五，春节是人们所做的事情能够带来好运．）它们The Spring Festival would be finished at the Lantern Festival in two weeks．【高分句型五】People often eat a kind of rice dumpling called yuanxiao．It could take people good luck all the year round．【高分句型六】（要点六，元宵节吃元宵给人们全年带来好运．）

【点评】本题是图画作文，能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕所供图画内容，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

26．1． 这里有一些制作水果沙拉的小建议．

2． 首先，使用当季水果；其次，搭配不同颜色的水果，比如，把红色的苹果、青色的梨子和紫色的葡萄搭配起来会使沙拉看上去五彩缤纷；最后，在食用沙拉前再做沙拉．有些水果在空气中放置一段时间后会很快变色． 【分析】高分句型：

For example，mixing red apples，green pears and purple grapes together will make the salad look very colourful．例如，把红苹果、绿梨和紫葡萄混合在一起会使色拉看起来很鲜艳．这里make sb /sth do sth表示让…做某事．

Some of the fruit will quickly turn brown when you leave it in the air for some time．有些水果在空气中停留一段时间后会迅速变黄．这里when引导一个时间状语从句．

【解答】Here are some tips for making a fruit salad．（引出话题）First ，use fruit in season．Then，use fruit of different colours．For example，mixing red apples，green pears and purple grapes together will make the salad look very colourful．（高分句型）Last，prepare the fruit salad just before you are going to eat it．Some of the fruit will quickly turn brown when you leave it in the air for some time．（高分句型）（制作水果沙拉的小建议）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

27．\"五一\"小长假，你们全家去锡惠公园游玩．请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以\"How to Behave Politely\"为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论．要点提示：

亲身经历

1．我们玩得正开心，不文明的一幕发生了：一位女士满不在乎将垃圾扔

在地上；

2．我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的； 3．我将垃圾捡起来并扔进垃圾桶；

我的观点

4．人人都应该学习一些有关礼仪方面的知识；

5．列举不同场合须有的文明行为； 6．对我们来说，提升礼仪是必须的．

注意：1．征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5点须用2～3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；

3．词数80个左右，短文标题和开头已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数． 【分析】高分句型一：

We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened．

句中\"when something impolite happened\"为时间状语从句，\"enjoy oneself\"意为\"玩得开心\"．这句话意为：当不愉快的事情发生时，我们玩得正开心． 高分句型二：

It's necessary for us to improve our manners．

这句话的句式为：it is+形容词+for sb to do sth．句中\"it\"为形式主语，代指\"to improve our manners\"．这句话意为：对我们来说，提升礼仪很必要． 【解答】How to Behave Politely

During this May Day Holiday，all my family visited Xihui Park．We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened．【高分句型一】A lady dropped some litter carelessly on the ground．I tried to stop her from doing that，but she refused to listen to me．I picked it up and threw it into the dustbin．（叙述自己的经历）I think everyone should learn something about manners．（提出自己的观点）When we are in the library，we should keep quiet．When we cross the road，we should obey traffic rules．Before we get on a bus，we should queue for our turn． （建议怎么去做）It's necessary for us to improve our manners．【高分句型二】（总结全文）

【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．

28．假定你是李想，你的英国笔友John计划来你的家乡无锡游玩，给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡无锡．请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信． To：lixiang@china．com From：john2004@uk．com Subject：your hometown Dear Li Xiang，

How are you？I hope you are well．I am planning my trip to China these days．I'm thinking about travelling to your hometown ﹣ Wuxi．Would you please tell me these things？

• What do you think of the environment（环境） in your hometown？ • How do you like the people in Wuxi？Why do you think so？ • What can I do when I travel in Wuxi？

• How can I get to different places during my stay in Wuxi？ Please write back and tell me everything．

Best wishes John 注意：

1．回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3．词数70个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数． Dear John：

I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown ﹣ Wuxi．It is a good place to visit． _______．

I hope my answer is helpful to you．See you in Wuxi！

All the best，

Li Xiang

【分析】【高分句型一】

When you come to Wuxi，you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food．

当你来到无锡，你可以去不同的公园，并且吃到中国菜．when当……时候，引导时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】

If you go to different places in Wuxi，you can take a bus．

在无锡如果你去不同地方，你可以坐公共汽车．if如果，引导条件状语从句． 【解答】Dear John：

I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown ﹣ Wuxi．It is a good place to visit．The air is fresh in Wuxi．There are many trees and rivers．You can smell the flowers and hear the birds

sing．（环境） The people here are kind and helpful．In my community，people often help each other with problems． （人们友善爱帮助人，有问题互相帮助）When you come to Wuxi，you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food．【高分句型一】（去不同的公园，吃中国食物） If you go to different places in Wuxi，you can take a bus．【高分句型二】There are buses to different places every day． （ 交通） I hope my answer is helpful to you．See you in Wuxi！

All the best，

Li Xiang

【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式等．

29．学校开展评选\"最佳学生\"活动，你向校长推荐Sandy为\"最佳学生\"．要点如下： 1．Sandy又高又苗条．她脸上总是带着微笑；

2．她乐于助人．总是主动给我们提供帮助．经常帮助我们了解新世界； 3．她喜欢上DIY课程．擅长装饰房子．她总是为她朋友制作纸玫瑰；

4．上周在学校旅游期间，她为同班同学拍照．并把照片放在她的网页上供大家欣赏； 5．她喜欢和孩子们一起工作，她希望… 要求：

1．文章须包含所有要点，语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．词数80左右；

3．对第五要点作1﹣2句的发挥，文章意思完整； 4．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数． Dear Headmaster，

I'd like to recommend Sandy to win the Best Student Award． ____________

I think Sandy has all the qualities to be the Best Student．I hope you can agree with me．

Yours faithfully，

Millie．

【分析】【高分句型一】

She is good at decorating the house．她擅长装饰房子． be good at 擅长… 【高分句型二】

She hopes to be an excellent teacher她希望成为一名优秀的老师． hope to do sth 希望做某事 【解答】Dear Headmaster，

I'd like to recommend Sandy to win the Best Student Award．（点题）

Sandy is tall and slim．She often wears a smile on her face．（外貌）She is helpful．She always offers us help．She helps us learn about the new world．（乐于助人）She likes taking a

course in DIY．She is good at decorating the house．【高分句型一】She makes paper roses for her friends．（爱好）Last week，she took photos for her classmates during the school trip．She put the pictures on her homepage to let the classmates enjoy them．（上周旅游经历）She likes to work with children．She hopes to be an excellent teacher．【高分句型二】（梦想） I think Sandy has all the qualities to be the Best Student．I hope you can agree with me．

Yours faithfully，

Millie．

【点评】写作要抓住要点．要在\"准\"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．

30．Everyone has his or her interests and hobbies.

Please write a short passage within 50 words about one of your hobbies and why you like it， .

【分析】【高分句型一】

Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger． 此外，我参加各种体育活动来增强体质．in order to 为了，目的是 【高分句型二】

All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．

总之，我锻炼得越多，我就越健康．the +比较级，the+比较级，越……越…… 【解答】

My hobby

My hobby is to play sports．Here are the reasons for taking part in sports．（开篇点题）I usually play sports when I feel tired after study． I just want to relax myself and have fun．（锻炼可以使人放松，有乐趣） Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger．【高分句型一】（变得更强壮） What's more，I want to be slim and pretty by doing sports．（变得漂亮）

All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．【高分句型二】

【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．

31．假如你叫Linda，今年12岁， 要参加学校正在举办的\"健康形象大使（Health Image Ambassador）．竞选， 请用英语写一篇竞选稿， 内容包括如下信息： Linda Self introduction Diet and lifestyle

Your hobbies

Clothes you like wearing

注意：1．表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥． 2．词数：90词左右．开头已给出， 不计入总词数， 3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息，

Hello， everyone． My name is Linda． I'm 12 year old．________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】

I like dancing， reading and playing badminton．

我喜欢跳舞、阅读和打羽毛球．like doing sth喜欢做某事． 【高分句型二】

And I am a member of the school dancing team． 我是学校舞蹈队的一员．be a member of…的一个成员．

【解答】Hello， everyone． My name is Linda． I'm 12 year old． I'm in Class One Grade Seven．（个人信息） I like dancing， reading and playing badminton．【高分句型一】 I am good at dancing． And I am a member of the school dancing team．【高分句型二】（爱好） I need to keep fit， so healthy food is important for me． I often eat fruit and vegetables and seldom eat cakes or sweets． Every morning I get up early． After breakfast I walk to school． I do morning exercises every day． In the afternoon， I often do after﹣school activities with my classmates． Usually I go to bed at about nine o'clock every night．（生活方式） I like wearing the school uniform， because I look smart in it．（喜欢穿什么）

So you see I live a very healthy life． Please vote for me． Thank you！（总结全文） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

32．假设你是来自澳大利亚的学生 Henry 在阳光中学七（1）班进行交流学习，请 根据你的 happiness chart 向在澳大利亚的父母描述一下 你在中国的校园生活． Henry's happiness chart

Love

Subject

Homework

Like Dislike

Teachers &classmate

Sports

Classmates &library

注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；可适当发挥； 3．词数 80 左右，邮件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数． Dear dad and mum，

I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．________________．

All the best，

Henry

【分析】【高分句型一】

I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting．

我喜欢所有的科目，因为它们很有趣．because引导原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】

I think my school life is very fun．

我认为我的学校生活很有趣．I think+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear dad and mum，

I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．（点题）

My teachers are friendly to me，so I love them very much．My classmates often help me，so I like to play with them．I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting． 【高分句型一】I have to do homework after school，so I dislike it．I love sports，so I often play it with friends after class．（具体描述喜欢和不喜欢的） In all，I think my school life is very fun．【高分句型二】（总结全文） All the best． Henry

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

33．

our

Every child loves his mother． When we grow up， we should still respect our mother and try best to care for her． Read the two pictures and write a passage about them． Your writing should include the following： 1． To describe the two pictures．

2． To tell us your opinion about the two pictures．

3． To tell us what you want to do for your mother now and in the future． 注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3．词数80左右．

【分析】【高分句型一】Therefore， we should pay more attention to the elder's inner feelings．因此，我们应该多关注老人的内在情感． pay attention to \"关注、注意\"，后接名

词、代词或动名词． inner feelings 内在情感．

【高分句型二】We had better have more communication with them．我们最好与他们多交流．had better （not） do sth．最好 （不）做某事．have communication with sb． 与某人交流．

【解答】In the first picture， four young people are celebrating their mother's birthday． The young are happily taking photos， while their mother looks lonely． In the second picture， the old woman sits alone at home．（介绍两幅图片内容） From the two pictures， we know the old woman's children seldom spend time with her， except some get﹣together days． And sometimes they get together， but the young ignore the elder's inner feelings． I can feel the mom is unhappy and lonely． （根据图片描述自己的看法） Therefore， we should pay more attention to the elder's inner feelings． 【高分句型一】We are expected to spend more time with our friends． We had better have more communication with them． 【高分句型二】We can go shopping， cook dinner or watch TV with our parents． All in all，we should return home and pay more attention to parents's inner feelings． Only in this way， we can take good care of them．（结尾总结，升华主题）

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．

34．在一节写作课上，老师要求你们写一篇名为\"心目中的同学\"的短文，现在请你用英文来介绍一下你的同学Mike．

1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；

2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大； 3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖； 4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷； 5）他的梦想…我认为… 注意事项：

1）短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2）第5要点的内容必须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3）词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数． 参考词汇：

有创意的 creative 爱迪生 Edison

My classmate Mike ishard﹣working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day． 【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是介绍一下你的同学Mike．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；

2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大； 3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖； 4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷； 5）他的梦想…我认为… 常用到的重点短语： come up with 想出… be crazy about 对…着迷 give up 放弃

be known for 因…而著名 【高分句型】

1．His dream is ①to be an inventor②as great as Edison． ①动词不定式做表语，和be动词is构成系表结构． ②as…as与…一样．

2．I think①he will ②be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day ①后接省略了that的宾语从句． ②be known for 因…而著名

【解答】My classmate Michael is hard﹣working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．（Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子）In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．（他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大）He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．（他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖）Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's great fun for him．（现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷）His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．【高分句型】（他的梦想是成为像爱迪生一样的发明家）I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day．【高分句型】（我认为他会实现梦想）

【点评】这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯

35．今年年初，无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市．假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你在答题卡指定的位置上用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿，阐述你的观点和感想．内容提示如下：

1．修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；

2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩；

3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 注意：

1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5要点的内容须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数．

There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years． The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of openparks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future． ．

【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你对无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市的观点和感想．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；

2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 常用到的重点短语： a number of 大量的 have fun 玩的开心 both…and…两者都 deal with 处理

比较级+and+比较级 越来越… 【高分句型】

1．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays． to have a picnic and have fun 动词不定式做目的状语．

2．①More and more people have their own cars and②it's become difficult to park cars． ①比较级+and+比较级 越来越…

②it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．

【解答】There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．（修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁）There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．【高分句型】（新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩）More and more people have their own cars and it's become

difficult to park cars．【高分句型】（私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题）The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．（城市变化有利有弊；）I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．（我的希望）

【点评】本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．

36．每年的4月23日是世界读书日。在我校的读书周中将开展\"一人•一书\"的活动，向你的同学、亲友或师长推荐一本你喜欢的书。请你根据这项活动的主题及以下图表，写一篇推荐书目的英语短文参加活动。

注意事项：

（1）短文须根据图表自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； （2）词数在80个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； （3）短文必须写在答题卷指定位置上。 【分析】【高分句型一】

This book mainly tells the story of four people who go through hardships and finally reach the Western Paradise and obtain Buddhist the Scriptures.这本书主要讲述了四个人历经艰难困苦，最终到达西天，获得佛经的故事。 who引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】

My favorite character is Monkey King，not only because he is handsome，but also he is very clever and brave.我最喜欢的角色是孙悟空，不仅因为他英俊，而且他非常聪明和勇敢。 not only…but also…不仅……而且……

【解答】My favorite book is The Journey to the West.It is a book about fairy tales.It's very interesting and its author is Wu Cheng'en.There are four important characters in this book，they are Monk Xuanzang，Monkey King，Pigsy，Sandy. （人物）This book mainly tells the story of four people who go through hardships and finally reach the Western Paradise and obtain Buddhist the Scriptures.【高分句型一】（主要内容）I would like to recommend it to people who like fairy tales.

My favorite character is Monkey King，not only because he is handsome，but also he is very

clever and brave. 【高分句型二】I like this book very much，on the one hand，it is very interesting，on the other hand，it teaches me to persevere，no matter how big the difficulty is，we should persevere，only in this way can we succeed.（喜欢的理由）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

37．假如你是Jim，上周参加了八年级一班学生举行的一个班会，主题是\"Should students chat

on QQ？\"．请根据下面的表格提示，写一篇英文短文．

人数 理由

支持 30 1、交友 2、丰富生活 3、…

不支持 20 1、费时 2、陪伴家人 3、…

你的观点 少聊QQ，多读书…

注意：1．短文必须写在答题卡的指定区域，词数90字左右（不含以写好部分）． 2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，但不要逐条翻译． 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． Should students chat on QQ？

Last week I attended a class meeting of Class 1，Grade 8．They talked about if it is good for students to chat on QQ． 【分析】【高分句型一】

It's easy for friends to contact with each other on QQ朋友们在QQ上彼此联系很容易． it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

【高分句型二】

They say we should spend more time with our family members and friends．他们说我们应该多和家人和朋友在一起．

say后是省略 了that的宾语从句． 【解答】Should students chat on QQ？

Last week I attended a class meeting of Class 1，Grade 8．They talked about if it is good for students to chat on QQ．

30 of us think students should chat on QQ．They say QQ helps us make more friends．It's easy for friends to contact with each other on QQ．【高分句型一】They all say QQ makes our life more colourful．（支持和理由）And 20 of us think we shouldn't chat on QQ．They say we should spend more time with our family members and friends．【高分句型二】They also say we shouldn't believe in online friends．So they think that chatting online is a waste of time．（不

支持和理由）I think we shouldn't spend much time chatting on QQ．We should do more readings and do more exercise．（我的建议）

【点评】首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．

38．中国诗词大会的热议，仿佛给我们一股古典的清流．主持人和选手的涵养，让我们钦佩不已．学生该怎么度过自己的闲暇时光？你会推荐什么样的放松方式，理由是什么？请根据以下表格中的信息写一篇文章．

观点

一部分同学喜欢网络和电视

理由

1． 放松，信息量大…

2．可以足不出户和同学乃至陌生人互动…

另一部分同学喜欢亲近家人、自然和读书

1．与家人相处更加和睦 2．增长见识，开阔视野

你的思考

注意事项：

1． 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯．必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥． 2． 词数：90词左右．（开头已给出，不计入总词数．） 3． 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．

Our society is developing fast． People are getting busier too． As a result， people try to relax in their free time． We students have different ideas of spending our free time． _________．

【分析】【高分句型一】

it is easy for them to communicate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside．他们很容易与同学甚至陌生人交流和玩耍，而不去外面． it is+形容词 for sb to do sth某人做某事是…的． 【高分句型二】

In fact， they are not only good ways to get along better with family members， but also open up your mind and increase your knowledge．事实上，它们不仅是与家庭成员相处融洽的好方法，而且还能开阔你的思维，增加你的知识． not only…but also…不仅…而且…

【解答】Our society is developing fast． People are getting busier too． As a result， people try to relax in their free time． We students have different ideas of spending our free time． Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV． They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed． Besides， it is easy for them to communicate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside．【高分句型一】 （一部分同学的观点）Others think they should get close to their family， nature， and read a lot． In fact， they are not only good ways to get along better with family members， but also open up your mind and increase your knowledge．【高分句型二】（另一部分同学的观

…（不少于两点）

点）

I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy． What's more， we also do after﹣class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life．（我的思考）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

39．上周日我和Sandy去野生动物园参观，了解到很多动物的生存现状，想在School newsletter上发文呼吁同学们共同保护动物．请就下面表格提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文． 内容提示：

现状 原因 应对措施 建议

注意：

1．短文须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5个要点的内容须展开合理想象，适当发挥1﹣2句； 3．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Last Sunday，Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park． ． 【分析】高分句型一：

We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands．

句中\"that wildlife had nowhere to live\"为宾语从句，\"because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands\"为原因状语从句．句中短语有\"keep doing sth 持续做某事\"．这句话意为：我们了解到动物居无定所，因为人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地． 高分句型二：

We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being killed．

句中使用短语有\"not only…but also…不仅…而且…\"、\"protect sb from doing sth 保护…免受…\"．这句话意为：我们不仅可以立法，还可以多建自然保护区来保护动物免受杀害． 【解答】Last Sunday，Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park．We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands．【高分句型一】Also when the temperature dropped below zero，wildlife had no food to eat．（动物的生存现状）We should take action to prevent natural disasters and protect wildlife．We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being killed．【高分句型二】As students，we should always ask our parents and relatives not to buy any fur coats．We should try to keep our world clean and peace．（提出建议）

【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．

居无定所

人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地

无食可觅 温度降至零度以下

不仅可以立法，还可以多建自然保护区（nature reserve）

作为中学生，…

40．学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提示，以\"My life in 20 years\"为题，写一篇参赛短文，分享你对未来的憧憬．

My life in 20 years

Family Friends Job

take care of my parents； … talk about the past school life； …

take on new challenges；

…

注意：1．词数：90词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名，校名等信息；

3．文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥．

My life in 20 years

I

am

always

working

hard

for

a

bright

future． I

imagine____________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】

I will make money to support my parents because they gave me so much when I was young． 我会赚钱养活我父母，因为在我小的时候他们给了我很多．动词不定式 to support my parents 表示目的；because因为，引导原因状语从句，when当……时候，引导时间状语从句．

【高分句型二】

I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with．

我会有很多朋友和我一起谈论过去的学校生活．本句使用了定语从句who I can talk about the past school life with． 【解答】My life in 20 years

I'm always working hard for a bright future．I imagine life in 20 years will sure be busy and wonderful． （引出话题）As for my job，I will be a doctor． I will take on new challenges because I love it． （未来工作）My parents will be too old to take care of themselves．So taking good care of them will be my duty．I will make money to support my parents because they gave me so much when I was young． 【高分句型一】（未来家庭） I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with．【高分句型二】（未来的朋友）

In a word，life in 20 years will be better than it is now．I will try my best to make it possible to have a better life!（美好祝愿）

【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误．最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误．

41．学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提示，以\"My life in 20 years\"为题，写一篇短

文，分享你对未来的憧憬．

注意事项：

1．词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3．文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥． My life in 20 years

I'm always working hard for a bright future I imagine

【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是针对\"My life in 20 years\"根据图表内容写一篇作文．时态主要为一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称及第三人称．要注意上下文的衔接． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．家庭：照顾父母 2．工作：接受新的挑战 3．朋友：谈论过去的校园生活 4．其他方面 5．总结

常用到的重点短语： take care of 照看；照顾

take on new challenges 接受新的挑战

talk about the past school life 谈论过去的校园生活 too…to…太…以至于不能… play an important role 扮演重要的角色 高分句型：

1．It's my dream job that can save lots of people's lives．它是我可以挽救别人生命的梦想工作 that can save lots of people's lives是定语从句，修饰先行词dream job．

2．My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later．我的父母年龄太大了以至于不能照顾自己． too…to…太…而不能… 【解答】My life in 20 years

I'm always working hard for a bright future I imagine．Life in 20 years will sure be busy and wonderful．（引出话题）As for my job，I will be a doctor．It's my dream job that can save lots of people's lives．（高分句型）I will take on new challenges because I love it．（工作）

My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later．（高分句型）So taking good care of them will be my duty．（家庭） I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with．It will be funny to talk with them．（朋友） Besides，Life in 20 years will sure be wonderful．With the technology development，robots will play an important role in twenty years．Every family will have one or more of them．So will I．My children will learn from the Internet，which would save all the paper needed to print textbooks．

In a word，I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life!（美好祝愿） 【点评】这是一篇图表给出材料的作文，图表中给出的材料较为丰富，考生在写作时，图表内容必须包括在内．在自己的观点部分，考生需要自己适当的发挥，建议考生在平时的英语学习中积累一些常用到的重点句型和短语，出彩的发挥会给文章增色不少．

42．假如你是Nick，北京阳光中学七年级5班的一名学生．今年暑假你将作为交换生到英国姐妹学校去学习、生活一段时间．请你根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一篇文章，向homestay家庭简单地介绍你自己． 1． 出生日期：生于2005年10月2日； 2．外貌：……

3． 爱好及理由：1）阅读，理由……2）唱歌，理由…… 4． 擅长：运动，最爱羽毛球，经常在放学后练习； 5． 喜欢吃的食物……，理由…… Dear homestay father/mother My name is Nick．

Best wishes! Nick

【分析】高分句型一：

I often practice playing badminton after school．

practice doing sth练习做某事．这句话意为：我经常课后练习打羽毛球． 高分句型二：

Because they are good for our health．

be good for 对…有好处．这句话意为：因为他们对我们的身体有好处． 【解答】Dear homestay father/mother，

My name is Nick．I was born on 2nd，Oct，2005．I have a round face and have short straight hair．I am tall in my class．I like reading．Because reading can broaden my horizons in different aspects．I also like singing．Because I think singing can make people happy．I am good at sports，too．My favorite sport is badminton．I often practice playing badminton after school（高分句型一）．As for my favorite food，I like tomatoes best，Because they are good for our health（高分句型二）．（从自己生日，外貌，爱好，擅长的运动，喜爱的食物出发介绍）

I think we will have a good time．I am looking forward to your reply（结尾给出期盼） Best wishes! Nick

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

43．假如今年暑假，你和你父母去了杭州旅游． 请根据以下要点，以\"Our trip to Hangzhou \"为题写一篇80字左右的短文，结束那次旅游．

1．今年暑假，我和父母自驾去杭州旅游，行程约四个小时． 2．杭州市我国最美丽的城市之一，有许多名胜． 3．我们参观的西湖（the West Lake），玩得很开心． 4．我们品尝了美食，了解了不同的文化． 5．我们很累，但很开心．我希望…

要求：第五点用1﹣2句话进行切合主题的发挥． Our trip to Hangzhou 【分析】高分句型一

It took us four hours to get there．此句是一般过去时的陈述句．运用句型：It takes sb some time to do sth．\"做某事花某人多少时间\"，此句可翻译为\"到达那里花我们4个小时的时间．\" 高分句型二

I hope I can go there again．此句是一般现在时的宾语从句．句子I can go there again．是动词hope 的宾语．运用短语go there \"去那里\"，此句可翻译为\"我希望再去那里．\" 【解答】Our trip to Hangzhou

My parents and I drove car to Hangzhou this summer holiday． It took us four hours to get there．（高分句型一）（要点一，这个暑假和父母自驾一起去了杭州旅游．） We enjoyed ourselves there．

As we all know， Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China． There are many places of interest in it．（要点二，杭州是我国最美丽的城市之一，有许多名胜．） We visited the West Lake． When we saw it， we couldn't believe our eyes． How big and beautiful! We had a good time there．（要点二，我们参观了西湖，我们玩的很开心．） We also tasted many kinds of food and learned a

lot about different cultures．（要点三，我们品尝了美食，了解了不同的文化．）We were very tired， but we still felt very happy． I hope I can go there again．（高分句型二） If you can go and see for yourself， I believe you'll love it very much．（要点四，自己的感受和希望．）

【点评】本题是提纲作文，能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

44．假定你是苏海，你的美国朋友David给你发了下面的邮件，请仔细阅读邮件并根据信

中的内容和生活实际用英语回复，可适当发挥．

To：suhai@163．com From：david@hotmail．com Subject：relationship

Dear Su Hai，

I have a problem and I don't know how to deal with it．I have two elder sisters． They're both clever and always do everything well．I feel I can never be as good as them． I am worried about the following problems these days．Can you give me some help？ ◆Should I just be myself or make a change？ ◆How can I let my parents feel proud of me？ ◆Can you share one of your experiences with me？ Best wishes， David

注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数．

2．短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，

Thanks for your email．I'm very sorry to hear that ． I hope my answers will be of some help to you．

Best wishes，

Su Hai

【分析】【高分句型一】

You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．你最好不要和你的姐妹们比较． had better do sth最好做某事． 【高分句型二】

But I do my best to work hard．但我尽我最大的努力工作． do one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事． 【解答】Dear David

Thanks for your email．I m very sorry to hear that you are very worried these days．（表示同情）

You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．【高分句型一】I think you just need to be yourself instead of trying to be like someone else．Remember that you and your sisters are all smart in different ways．Develop your own interests，and don't be afraid to fail．You can be as special as your sisters are．In fact，parents love each child．I think they will understand you and feel proud of you．（建议）

My brother often does better in study than me．But I do my best to work hard．【高分句型二】My parents understand me and they often give me help．It doesn't matter who is the best．The most important thing is we should be ourselves and never give up．Then we will feel much better．（分享自己的经历）

I hope my answers will be of some help to you（希望）

Best wishes．

Su Hai

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

45．最近，苏州日报开展中学生英语作文大赛，主题是我的家乡﹣苏州，你也想参赛，请根据以下要点，写一篇80字左右的文章，标题已给出． 1，它是个历史悠久的大城市，以园林和丝绸（silk）而出名． 2，它有5个区（district）组成，桥多，河流多． 3，过去道路狭窄，人们步行或乘船出行．

4，这些年来，苏州已经发生了巨大的变化…（请写出一个变化） 5，苏州人热爱大自然，保护环境，力争把家乡变成国际化大城市． 6，苏州一年四季都很美，它是居住的好地方． 【分析】高分句型一：

In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot or by boat． 句中涉及的结构为\"so…that…如此…以致于…\"，这句话意为：在过去道路是如此的狭窄，人们只能步行或乘船出行． 高分句型二：

We try to make our hometown an international city．

句中涉及的短语有：\"try to do sth 努力做某事\"；\"make sb/sth+名词/形容词 使…成为…\"．这句话意为：我们努力把家乡变成国际化城市．

【解答】My hometown Suzhou is a big city with a long history．It is famous for its gardens and silk．It is made up of five districts．There are many rivers and bridges in Suzhou．（介绍苏州文化）

In the past，the roads were so narrow that people went outside only on foot or by boat．【高分句型一】But Suzhou has changed a lot over the years．Now we can see wide and clean roads with many trees on both sides．There are many tall buildings everywhere．（苏州的变化） People here love the natural beauty and we also protect the environment．We try to make our hometown an international city．【高分句型二】Suzhou is beautiful in any season，so I think it's a good place to live．（苏州的环境）

【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．

46．假如你是John，想邀请你的朋友Mike来你家．请你按照下面的提示写一篇邀请函．80词左右．

要点：1．新家位于市中心，住在9楼．

2．邻居们友好善良，志愿者经常帮助人们解决各种问题．

3．路线：可乘地铁到达人民路（Renmin Road），在A出口处出来，沿着这条路走，在第

二个十字路口向右拐，你会在右边看见大楼． 4．…． Dear Mike，

I would like to invite you to my new home． _____

Yours John．

【分析】【高分句型一】

they often help people with all kinds of problems他们帮助人们解决各种问题． help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事． 【高分句型二】

I am looking forward to seeing you at my home我期盼能在我家看到你． look forward to doing sth 期盼做某事． 【解答】Dear Mike，

I would like to invite you to my new home．My new home is in the centre of the city．I live on the ninth floor．（新家位于市中心，住在9楼）My neighbours are friendly and kind．Some of them are volunteers，and they often help people with all kinds of problems．【高分句型一】（邻居们友好善良，志愿者经常帮助人们解决各种问题．）

Here is the way to my home．You can take the underground to Renmin Road．Get out at Exit A．Walk along the road，and turn right at the second crossing，You will see the building on your right．（路线）

I am looking forward to seeing you at my home．（邀请） Yours John

【点评】第一步仔细阅读提示，思考所给信息，假话文章大致内容，第二步根据信息要求遣词造句，造句成文，第三步，通读全文，纠正错误．

47．假如你是Sandy，想邀请美国交流生Tommy来苏州游玩，了解苏州文化．请根据以下要求完成一封邀请信，信中向 Tommy介绍苏州及你所安排的一些活动．

苏州概况

1．位于中国东部，距离上海约90公里； 2．有许多名胜，是旅游的好地方； 3．…（自拟一点）

活动安排

1．参观苏州园林； 2．品尝当地美食； 3．购买精美礼物； 4．…（自拟一点）

要求：1．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 2．词数90左右，文章开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 3．文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息．

Dear Tommy，

How are you going？I'm writing to invite you to my hometown，Suzhou．I'll tell you something about it and some of the interesting things we'll do when you come here． ．

Welcome to Suzhou!Welcome to my home! Best wishes! Sandy

【分析】【高分句型一】

When you come here，I'll show you around our city．你来的时候，我带你参观我们的城市． when 引导时间状语从句；show sb around …带某人参观…… 【高分句型二】

I am sure you will have a good time．我相信你会玩得很开心． have a good time 玩的开心． 【解答】Dear Tommy，

How are you going？I'm writing to invite you to my hometown，Suzhou．I'll tell you something about it and some of the interesting things we'll do when you come here．Suzhou is located in the east of China，about 90 kilometers away from Shanghai．When you come here，I'll show you around our city．【高分句型一】It has many places of interest and it is a good place to travel．（苏州是旅游的好地方．） We can also enjoy the delicious food．（品尝美食）There are many beautiful gardens in my hometown．The air is fresh and the beautiful flowers are planted and birds' sound can be heard everywhere．（空气清新，鸟语花香）You can buy beautiful gifts for your family in the gift shop．（购买精美礼物）What's more，the people in my hometown are very friendly．I am sure you will have a good time．【高分句型二】

Welcome to Suzhou!Welcome to my home! Best wishes! Sandy

【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

48．寒假将至，同学们即将迎来一个快乐的寒假．你的同学Sandy通常是这样度过寒假的，

请你介绍一下Sandy的寒假生活．

健康生活 快乐学习

1）早睡早起；多吃水果和蔬菜，多做运动；

2）常穿棉质衣服和运动鞋．

1）做2小时作业； 2）空余时间读书看报．

庆祝活动

1）和家人团聚吃大餐； 2）与同学聚会开派对．

注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Sandy's Winter Holiday

Hello， I'm happy to tell you something about Sandy's winter holiday． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】

It's important for her to wear clothes made of cotton and comfortable trainers because they are good for health．对她来说，穿棉质的衣服和舒适的运动鞋是很重要的，因为它们有益于健康．

It's important for to do sth对某人来说做某事很重要． be good for 有益于 【高分句型二】

At the same time，she spends two hours doing her homework．同时，她花了两个小时做家庭作业．

sb spend some time doing sth某人花时间做某事 at the same time同时 【解答】Sandy's winter holiday

Hello，I'm happy to tell you something about Sandy's winter holiday．（点题）

She gets up at eight in the morning，and go to sleep at nine in the evening．She eats more healthy food and do more exercise to keep fit．It's important for her to wear clothes made of cotton and comfortable trainers because they are good for health．【高分句型一】（健康生活）

At the same time，she spends two hours doing her homework．【高分句型二】She likes reading，so she also reads some books and newspapers every day．In the afternoon she practices dancing with her friends．（快乐学习）

During the Spring Festival，she has a great party with his classmates． He also has a big dinner with her family to celebrate this most important holiday．She likes to set off fireworks with her parents to celebrate the Spring Festival．I am sure she has a great time on that day．（庆祝活动）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

49．假如你是李俊，你的美国朋友David想在中国认识更多的朋友．你通过电子邮件，把你最好的朋友王浩介绍给他．请你结合以下要点，完成该邮件．

年龄、外貌 个性 爱好 其他情况

15岁，方脸，高个子 慷慨、乐于助人，…（自拟1点） 痴迷于DIY，上周…（自拟1点）

对了解不同种类的鸟类感兴趣，是观鸟协会的成员；

最喜欢冬季，因为他喜欢…（自拟2点）

理想

长大后周游世界

注意：1．词数90左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数． 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，

How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face．

Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．

He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me．He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．

He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up．

I hope you can make friends with him．Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival． Best wishes． yours， Li Jun

【分析】高分句型：

So he wants to ravel round the world when he grows up．所以他长大后想周游世界．这里want to do sth表示想做某事．

I hope you can make friends with him．我希望你能和他交朋友．这里hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句．

【解答】Dear David，

How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． （引出话题） He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face．（年龄，外貌）

Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．

（个性）He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me． （爱好）He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．（其他情况）

He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up（高分句型）．（理想）

I hope you can make friends with him．（高分句型） Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival．（希望） Best wishes． yours， Li Jun

【点评】这是一篇话题作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求．写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥．

50．澳大利亚此次发生了特大丛林火灾，火势蔓延了四分之一的国土．请认真阅读以下导图，用英文写一篇短文，贴在 School Newsletter 上．

Big fires

Possible causes （原因）： ●humans' activities ●… Facts：

●hot， dry， less rain ●bush fires， forest fires Results：

●800 buildings fell down ●animals like koalas died ●thick fog everywhere Your feelings： …

注意事项：1．短文内容须包括导图要点，要求表达清楚、语法正确、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．词数在 80 个左右，首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．短文必须写在答题卷指定的位置上． __________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】

If someone smokes in the forest， it can easily lead to forest fires． 如果有人在森林里吸烟，很容易导致森林火灾．if引导条件状语从句． 【高分句型二】

I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a disaster will not happen again．

我希望人们应该加强森林保护，这样灾难就不会再发生了．I hope+宾语从句．so that引导目的状语从句．

【解答】Australia has been hit by big fires that have spread across a quarter of the country．（点题）

I think there may be two main reasons． First， it may be caused by humans' activities．Second， it may be caused by the weather．（主要原因）It's summer in Australia

now． It is very hot and there is less rain，so the forest is very dry．If someone smokes in the forest， it can easily lead to forest fires．【高分句型一】（条件）The forest fires have made 800 buildings fell down，a lot of animals like koalas died．The thick fog is everywhere．The environmental pollution in Australia is very serious．（结果）

I feel sorry about this． I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a disaster will not happen again．【高分句型二】（感谢）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．