雀幸网课：BEC中级写作大作文Report写作方法

雀幸网课：BEC中级大作文Report

BEC中级写作不准备写作考试指定会吃亏。商务英语写作思维方式跟我们英语的写作方式不一样，比如，力求简练、明了，删除一切冗词废话，把重要的内容呈现给对方。但要避免加入个人感情色彩，下面这篇Report大家可以当做参考。

Report

This report aims at outlining which aspects of our department function most effectively, which ones need improvement and how to achieve an efficient improvement.

First of all, it needs to be stressed out that the majority of the team generally shows a real team spirit, is willing to do his best to prioritize some smooth interactions with customers and is not reluctant to work outside the normal working hours.

On top of that, every member of the team has been carefully selected for his/her excellent qualifications in terms of negotiating skills and communications abilities.

As a result, it came out of the recent survey, conducted with most of our customers, that our department has an excellent image outside the company.

Unfortunately, however, some aspects appear to be less brilliant. As part of our

sales force, people spend most of their time on the phone and cannot fit any training course within their schedule. As there is no clear strategy to encourage the employees to attend training courses, they may feel guilty to decide to use part of their working time to get a better knowledge on a computer software for instance.

This being, said, I strongly recommend to define a clear strategy encouraging people to register, at least, to two training courses, each year.

This would help them to understand that, whatever ...

其实大作文有很大的自由发挥的空间，因为题目并不会完整给出所有信息，要在提供的情景下自己进行合理的补充和解释。重要的是说话要有要点和逻辑。然后是清楚明白的表达自己的意思。